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houstonfan
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# Gesendet: 25 Jul 2005 21:30
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Esther
So your piece does not enclose to what I wrote.
actually it does work...txninny started with "my" to signify that Ruslana is speaking and then says that Yapetuz looked at her and said...re-read and take out txninny's "my victory in" and it will make sense...

txninny
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# Gesendet: 25 Jul 2005 21:30
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Esther
yes actually it does. Re-read my post. I was speaking as Ruslana.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 25 Jul 2005 22:34
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Ok I understand it now.

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 25 Jul 2005 22:39
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Ruslana takes the locket...

and looks worried into the ground. She didnt know what to say anymore. Yapetuz said: its time for you to meet my Master. Please follow Mr Ilex.
A little dwarf in funny clothes came forward and grabbed Ruslanas hand. She looks back at Yapetuz but he didnt follow them. You must go yourself, he said.

Ilex lead Ruslana up on a narrowed twisted stairs to a tower. At the top they was met by a huge wooden door. Ilex then ran down the stairs. Wait!! shout Ruslana but he was gone fast.

Ruslana took a deep breath and grabbed the huge golden ring on the door. She hadnt even start to knock with it before the doors open itself. She was met by a multicolored room with carpets on the walls. Reminds me of the Kolomyika video, she thought for herself. At the end of the room it was a table and a huge chair. Smoke was coming from it. The chair slowly turned around and an old man in white beard appears.
-Welcome Ruslana. My name is Hezekiah and Im the master of the Pukmerin people. Please have a seat.

Ruslana sat down in front of his huge table. She was silent and calm, feeling the seriousness in the situation.

You are called here to fight for yourself, said Hezekiah. By this you would need the locket.
You see, theres a an evil wizard in the sad walley that has to be defeted. By this you have to pass The Three Choises and then meet him eye by eye. When you success with this you have freed yourself and my people from the forbidden forest.

houstonfan
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# Gesendet: 26 Jul 2005 06:12 - Edited by: houstonfan
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When you succeed with this you have freed yourself and my people from the forbidden forest.

Hezakiah continues "By facing me, you have chosen to answer three questions and take three journey's into the depths of your soul and find the true Ruslana. At the end of your journey the evil wizard, μΰβςοΰ, will ask you your final question. If you fail to answer this without your faith, heart and all the exists in you, your happiness and life as you know it will disappear forever. Will you except this test of your faith and heart?"

Ginta
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# Gesendet: 26 Jul 2005 11:07
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This topic it very interesting and nice.

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 26 Jul 2005 18:47
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Will you except this test of your faith and heart?"

I guess I have no choise....said Ruslana. I dont want to loose my life. Look Im worried about my husband. He is expecting me.....
Hezekiah replied fast: dont worry, he will feel that you do somthing good for you both. Now please go and fullfill your mission.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 26 Jul 2005 19:24
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But my husband!! He is always there for me and ...... Grr allright allright I go where do I have to go?

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 27 Jul 2005 02:54
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You know where to go, Hezekiah replied.
The door opened and Hezekiah looked deep into Ruslanas eyes. Goodbye my friend, I believe in you, he said and then turned his back again....

Ruslana waited some seconds. Couldnt really sort everything whats in her mind... she left down the stairs. walking slowly, thinking. I want to go home! I miss my husband...everyone miss me...can I do this I was asked to do.....what choise do I have....
-Ruslana, there you are! she was interrupted in her thouhts by Extuz who met her at the end of the stairs.
Please, have some rest now. You have a long journey to wait. It starts early tomorrow morning in the sunrise.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 27 Jul 2005 09:38
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Sunrise?? How can that be we are under the ground!!But she did not ask.

The next morning Extuz waked her. When she opened her eyes she thought did I open my eyes??? But it was the dark. Extuz lead her to another room filled wich was nice decorated. With just enough light to see what was in it. In the middle a table with four chairs old fashioned ones and a kitchen in the same styl. Ruslana liked the room specially the corner who was filled with little lights, paper, couch and cuchons. There was a little table filled with all kinds of midieval bread and bottles filled with strange coloured fluid. Ruslana supossed it would be some kind of lemonade.

Ruslana asked Extuz When you look at this room what do you think you must do?? Euh first I must cook cause I am very hungry do yo also want something?? Ruslana be serious please. Well thell me than. First you eat the bread and drink one of the bottles choose the colour and shape of bread your feeling wants. Is that all Ruslana thought. And there is paper and pencils write down your feelings doesn't matter how you may even draw!

But remember what I said about the bread and bottles. So here is my extra advice eat the same shaped bread and the same coloured drinks while you are writing. For each is another colour and another feeling. You will feel them when it is the time for that. And there is enough so don't be affraid there will be not enough.

How long do I have to stay here! Till you drunk all the 8 colours and ate all the 8 different shaped bread.
That is very long!!! Do you see that door there is the bathroom and you can sleep on the couch and there is a blanket under the table. Now go!!

Ruslana sat down and thought of what drink she would grab. Then she remembered that she must not think of it but her feeling. She closes her eyes and reach for one she grabed the..............................................................

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Extra info I mean with the colours and tht she must eat and drink it. It is to help her concentrate on 8 songs that is why she must eat and drink the same shape and colour while she is working on the songs. Cause Extuz knows she is not going to write a story or draw. She is a mucisian!!

Esther
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# Gesendet: 27 Jul 2005 17:09
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Red bottle and a strange piece of bread it had all kind of points like a star but then in all directions. She was starved and ate and druk it fast then lay down on the sofa/couch. She was so angry that she started to cry. Also she got a little bit of despiration in her. To get it out she started to write all words that came up it became a song. A song full of frustrations filled with loads of anger. She pushed harder and harder on the pencil, wrote faster and faster and then she threw it all away. She felt empty and wanted to grabe a heart shaped piece of bread when she rememered what he said. your feeling choose the colour and shape do not eat another or drink before one is finished Ofcourse She must first finish her song full of angerfustrations. She picked the paper back up and read it and scrap some things... She did go on. In the mean while she ate more strange bread with points and drunk the red stuff. After she had finished she did lay down and sleep she was so empty. She needed to reload.......

Esther
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# Gesendet: 30 Jul 2005 16:52
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(not for the story why don't you go on when I am not here!!!:P:P:P :'(!!!)

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 31 Jul 2005 00:42
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Esther
why don't you go on when I am not here

good question. I have thought of it and I got stuck on some details from your last two posts. Im not sure I understand it all and I send you sms about it but you cant read it as you said today.

How can that be we are under the ground
They are underground? its nothing beforethat says that they are. Also nothing says its impossible for Ruslana to see the sunrise at all. This makes no sence and needs an explaination.

Ruslana asked Extuz When you look at this room what do you think you must do??
For me it would be more natural that Extuz ask this question to Ruslana, not the opposite....


first I must cook cause I am very hungry do yo also want something?? Ruslana be serious please. Well thell me than

????

How long do I have to stay here! Till you drunk all the 8 colours and ate all the 8 different shaped bread.
That is very long!!! Do you see that door there is the bathroom and you can sleep on the couch and there is a blanket under the table. Now go!!


Here I have a tip for you to make things more clear for the reader. Please state who is saying what. Preferable with an expression. For example:

-How long do I have to stay here! ask a worried Ruslana.
-Till you drunk all the 8 colours and ate all the 8 different shaped bread (and Lusse ask here: and when you have written 8 feeling, i.e songs?) .
Ruslana almost screams -That is very long!!! Extus tries to calm her by saying: Do you see that door there is the bathroom and you can sleep on the couch and there is a blanket under the table. Now go!!

Esther
sorry if It seemes that I "complain" to much. I know ýou love writing stories and I dont want to hurt you with my comments. SORRY but I got to confused to find a continue. I dont want this story to end yet!! Im not ´giving it up but I think I need some more clearance in these last happenings first.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 10:50
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[b]Lusse[b]
No not at all but I don't have much time now to change. cause I wrote it so it is clear for me. I will read it again and change it. But that I have to do at home then i have more time cause I don't have to pay. So maybe a little stop??? hahaha

Ginta
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 11:07
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This game it very hard, but interestin, jabūt good logical thinking.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 13:18
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Hmm well it depends on your english and on the person who writes it. Me for example did not think of it that you might not understand who says what hahaha.
But I am gonna solve that problem soon as I get home. So there is a pause/break for about 13 days. oke??

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 15:28
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sure Esther, I hope the others who joined also will come back then. I asked about it but didnt get any reply. But if we get stuck again and get tired of it. Then I have the perfect end of the story, lol!!

Guido
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 20:13
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Esther kan je voor Lusse vertalen :
En toen kwam er een varkentje met een lange snuit en het verhaaltje was uit ?
Normally those stories end with : And they lived long and happy.

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 8 Aug 2005 20:37
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Normally those stories end with : And they lived long and happy.

oh, yeah....that means she has to meet her husband sooner or later. Maybe resque him from some dangerous adventure....

Guido
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# Gesendet: 10 Aug 2005 17:49
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Maybe resque him from some dangerous adventure....
Do you mean him marry Ruslana ?
She puts your heart on fire even with a real flame trower.

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 10 Aug 2005 17:56
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Do you mean him marry Ruslana ?

va? they are already married. Ruslana has expressed already in the story that she is concerned about her husband...

Esther
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# Gesendet: 19 Aug 2005 00:39
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Guido dat van die fairytale is een aanduiding ik bedoel niet echt dat het een sprookje moet zijn maar gewoon een fantasy verhaal dat wij maken. Maar ik heb het uitgeprint myn stukje en ga die verbeteren.

Esther
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# Gesendet: 28 Nov 2005 11:16 - Edited by: Esther
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Hi all!!
I finaly found the time to clear my piece up so we can go on if you want that.
I will put the whole story till mine in one post after this one.
I have changed some stuff like the number 8 is pretty much so I took 4. Or else the story will be stuck in that room.

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 1 Dez 2005 22:56
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Esther

oh yeah! I have totally forgot about this! Lets continue!! but I have to read it all again to get into the story situation again. Gosh, I get blocked when seeing this much text but I will try,,,

Esther
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# Gesendet: 1 Dez 2005 23:34 - Edited by: Esther
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***Still reading??? hihi OOOOOW NOOO Don't write anything there is a mistake in it!!! SORRY I HAVE TO Undo that mistake Oooooow why didn't I see this fault earlier!!! I have to rewrite it again!!! grrr sorry could you wait a little longer cause It hink I have it at school on the computer if I am lucky ****

Lussekatt
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# Gesendet: 1 Dez 2005 23:38
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Still reading???

lol, no I havent started! My husband called and we talked for a while.

I have to rewrite it again!!!
no! just edit it!! oooh, I just realise that you cant as it has went so much time since the post. but Take the cut and paste thing and I can help you out take off what you want. You dont have to write it all again!!

Esther
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# Gesendet: 1 Dez 2005 23:42
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Lussekatt
Thanks I will mail it to you!!

Esther
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# Gesendet: 2 Dez 2005 00:47 - Edited by: Esther
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***I forgot a very very big part so I post it again!!! Sorry sorry sorry pleas do write on!!***

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Esther:
Ruslana was walking in Kyiv and thinking about a new concert.
She was walking to somewhere but did not know to where.
She was in deep thoughts thill she heard...............

Guido:
someone shouting : Hey ! Hey ! Hey !

Lusse:
Ruslana emediately got awake from her deep thoughts. Those words was very familiar and close to her and gave a sudden reaction. She turned around and she almost got a shock when she saw.........

Esther:
a big big very big thing of four legs staring at her.
Happily Ruslana knew what to do after she found herself back without fear she did........................

Lusse:
....slowly went towards the big wolf that was staring right at her. It was calm, just standing there and even invited Ruslana to touch the fur and give it a hug. The wolf said to Ruslana "come along, I want to show you something" ....

Houstonfan:
Ruslana, being suspicious of the wolf did as he asked. The light of day was fading turning everything around her to black, night was upon her. The wolf lead her into the forbidden forest where no man of any strength would dare tred alone at night. The air around her became stagnant and thick, she could see her own breath in the moon light.

txninny:
The wolf turned and faced her and said " Ruslana, there is nothing to be affraid of. I am here to protect you." With this, Ruslana gave a small smile to the wolf and gladly followed. As the night grew brighter from the moonlight...

Esther:
She followed the wolf to another place deeper into the forrest. Ruslana wanted to ask the wolf a question but the wolf said: shhhhh and watch. Ruslana saw that they were on an open spot/place deep in the forest but that was not all she saw.............

Houstenfan:
Ruslana, being blinded by the brightness of the moon turned to speak to the wolf. But the wolf had vanished. She was now alone and the light which was guiding her was now black. Fear rose in her and she began to tremble. The silence of the forest was deafening.

Lusse:
Ruslana was breathing heavily. She couldnt really think clear of what to do next. But she somehow felt calm, convincing herself not to be affraid. Suddenly the forest seemes to wake up from its deep silence. The wind came slowly and starting to twist the leaves in the threes around her. She somehow thought that the wind was wispering her name: Ruslaaaaaanaaaa, Ruslaaaaaanaaaa.... she began to walk, tumbling around and almost fell. Her long hair got stuck in a bush as she didnt see it in the dark. When she was working with to get hair off from there then suddenly.....

houstonfan:
a group of people surrounded her. They were all asking " Who are you? Where did you come from? Who are you?" Being stunned and somewhat frightened, Ruslana did not know how to answer them. What they wanted or why they did not know who she was. She thought....

txtinny:
Why do they not know me? All was silent when a familiar voice whispered from behind her. Ruslana...Ruslana, turned to see only a shadowed figure in a hooded cloak. She thought, why is this voice so familiar? It was not the leaves nor the wind whispering to her, but this shadowed figure that was calling her name. She wondered...

Lusse:
....how the wolfs voice could be in the appearance of a human beeing. A man stepped forward to her and introduced himself as Yapetuz. Welcome to my wild world he said. This is my people.

houstonfan:
My people know not of you and care not for your status. You were lead here because a darkness shadows over you. Fear us not, we only want to know the "real" you. Things weigh heavily on your mind giving you no peace. In order for you to have complete happiness, you must release all that is troubling you. With this said, Ruslana...

Lusse:
Thats very kind of you, thank you but...

txtinny:
my journey has been long and I am tired. Ruslana turns and asks "May I stay with your people for the night?" Yapetuz says "It would be a pleasure if you would grace my people with your company." Yapetuz turns to his brother, "Please ready a room for our guest." His brother bows to Ruslana as if she were a queen and says "It would be my pleasure." and leaves.

Lusse:
At the same time Ruslana and Yapetuz made the conversation more people has joined in the dark forest. But it isnt dark anymore as they brought torches with them. Everyone was silent and started to walk on a small narrow path with Yapetuz brother Extuz in the lead. They was walking and walking. Ruslana felt both confused and very tired. Her feet hurts and she has walked long enough today.

Suddenly they could se a shadow of an hill with a kind of castleshaped building on the top in the moonlight. They enter the building from a huge platform that has to be led down to them, like after a bridge has been open. While inside there everyone was cheering and happy but also very curious of Ruslana who they have never met before.

On the huge inside yard in the middle of the building they had made a fire and people gathered together on the floor around it. People came to Ruslana and gave her food. That was exactly what she needed! As she was eating the people starts to play music.

txtinny:
As Ruslana listens to Yapetuz playing the bandura, he glances over to Ruslana and sees a calm, yet sad look in her eyes. Yapetuz wonders what is on her mind. The next day, after a restful sleep...

Esther:
she wakes up and she hears people sing and making music. She walks to the window and she sees that she can see the whole city. It is soo beautifull. Everything is still in the midievall age. The music, clothing, houses, stuff they use everything. Ruslana starts to worrie of her husband who she can't reach from her as there is no phone. Yapetuz comes into the room whithout knocking and it makes her feel a little bit angry and sais: Can't you knock and why am I here what is my husband suposed to think?? Maybe well not maybe he has called the police!! There are loads and loads of people who are missing me now!!! And the company my husband an I have?? Yapetuz says: Sit down and I will tell you about the state of your husband Ruslana: My husband his state!?!?!?!?!! Quiet!!! and why you are here and what you are going to do today to get happy!! First the state of your husband your husband....................................

txtinny:
Does not know of your whereabouts and does not wonder where you are. Nor is he worried, he knows the company you are in is safe. You were brought here because of a gift which you possess. To stand strong for others, live to fight, fight to live. Yet you do not fight for yourself. Your whole life has made a mark in the world, but what you do for yourself is of most importance. Your life and your name will be remembered for centuries to come but before this ends will you remember who you really are and what your happiness was? Ruslana began to...

Esther:
scream HOW!!!! I am a I don't know how many miles away from him and away over a day!! And he does not worrie where I am??? He loves me does miss me!! He is always with me!! How can he not be worried about me?? And our company well I am not that affraid that that will colaps but they need me!! And what gift!!! I can sing, I dance, I learned to conduct an orcestra I thought I was using all my gifst and everything. I fought yes indeed but wouldn't we al fight for such thing!!! Remember who I am I know who I am!!! Why are you thinking that I don't know who I am anymore!!! And my happiness well everyone has some of this times in his life!!! And she yelled on and on till she began to cry and said I don't know it all. I had so much to do you know. And she started to tell all what she did the last year starting with her great victory in..........................

txninny:
My victory in Eurovision does this mean nothing? This made my name known to everyone and I used this for good. I stood by my country in Orange Revolution and I fight for children. Does this mean nothing? Yapetuz looked at her and said "What you have done is honerable and has made you strong for others, but has this made you strong for yourself?" Your ability to sing and dance is the surface to a deeper you. Your journey begins today, your task is clear. You must use the strength you posses to fight for others and now use to fight for yourself. Yapetuz hands Ruslana a locket with dragon. Use this as your protection, remember your journey begins today. Ruslana takes the locket...

Esther
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# Gesendet: 2 Dez 2005 00:53
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Lussekatt:
and looks worried into the ground. She didnt know what to say anymore. Yapetuz said: its time for you to meet my Master. Please follow Mr Ilex.
A little dwarf in funny clothes came forward and grabbed Ruslanas hand. She looks back at Yapetuz but he didnt follow them. You must go yourself, he said.

Ilex lead Ruslana up on a narrowed twisted stairs to a tower. At the top they was met by a huge wooden door. Ilex then ran down the stairs. Wait!! shout Ruslana but he was gone fast.

Ruslana took a deep breath and grabbed the huge golden ring on the door. She hadnt even start to knock with it before the doors open itself. She was met by a multicolored room with carpets on the walls. Reminds me of the Kolomyika video, she thought for herself. At the end of the room it was a table and a huge chair. Smoke was coming from it. The chair slowly turned around and an old man in white beard appears.
-Welcome Ruslana. My name is Hezekiah and Im the master of the Pukmerin people. Please have a seat.

Ruslana sat down in front of his huge table. She was silent and calm, feeling the seriousness in the situation.

You are called here to fight for yourself, said Hezekiah. By this you would need the locket.
You see, theres a an evil wizard in the sad walley that has to be defeted. By this you have to pass The Three Choises and then meet him eye by eye. When you success with this you have freed yourself and my people from the forbidden forest.

Houstonfan:
I guess I have no choise....said Ruslana. I dont want to loose my life. Look Im worried about my husband. He is expecting me.....
Hezekiah replied fast: dont worry, he will feel that you do somthing good for you both. Now please go and fullfill your mission.

Esther:
But my husband!! He is always there for me and ...... Grr allright allright I go where do I have to go?

Lussekatt:
You know where to go, Hezekiah replied.
The door opened and Hezekiah looked deep into Ruslanas eyes. Goodbye my friend, I believe in you, he said and then turned his back again....

Ruslana waited some seconds. Couldnt really sort everything whats in her mind... she left down the stairs. walking slowly, thinking. I want to go home! I miss my husband...everyone miss me...can I do this I was asked to do.....what choise do I have....
-Ruslana, there you are! she was interrupted in her thouhts by Extuz who met her at the end of the stairs.
Please, have some rest now. You have a long journey to wait. It starts early tomorrow morning in the sunrise.

Esther:
Next morning Extuz woke her up. Ruslana thought when she opend her eyes: Did I open my eyes?? It was so dark in the lroom. Extuz lead her to another room filled with light and she saw that it was nice decorated. Just enough light to see what as in it. In the middle a table with four chairs old fashioned ones and a kitchen in de same style. Ruslana liked the room specially the corner. The corner was a little separated from the room cause of the curtains who where some sort of entrance. She walked to the corner and pushec the curtains away. She loved what she saw. It was filled with coushons and other soft materials. In the middle a little table with paper, pencils, paint, colour pencils and brushes. All things to write or draw with. She also saw another table a bigger one and a sofa. She turned and looked at Extuz.

Extuz said: Ruslana you may walk into the space behind the curtains and please sit down on the sofa. Ruslana did as she was told and sat on the sofa. Extuz walked to the bigger table and waved over it.
4 bowls with different shaped bread stood on the table and 12 bottles with 4 different coloured liquid in it. Well Ruslana Extuz said. I think you must be hungry. Ruslana stared at the bread and said yes I am. Ruslana what do you think you must do when you see all this?
Euh well I don?t know but I feel cause of my stomack that I have to eat. Ruslana be serious please. What I tell you now is very very important.
First you eat the bread and drink one of the bottles choose the colour and shape of bread your feeling wants. Is that all Ruslana thought. And there is paper and pencils write down your feelings doesn't matter how you may even draw!

Extuz turned around and stepped to the other side of the curtains and said:

But remember what I said about the bread and bottles. So here is my extra advice eat the same shaped bread and the same coloured drinks while you are writing. So you have to finish your work before you choose again. For each is another colour and another feeling. You will feel them when it is the time for that. And there is enough so don't be affraid there will be not enough.
When you have a question just call my name out loud then I will come. You can go out of this corner and go to the bathroom or kitchen to sit. Do not eat anything else then the bread and do not drink anything else than from those bottles.
Ruslana thought and asked: How long do I have to stay here?
Till you drunk all the 4 colours and ate all the 4 different shaped bread.
That is very long!!! Ruslana said.
It depents on yourself Ruslana. Now I have to leave you alone. Extuz walked to the other side back into the room where they came from.

Ruslana was starved and took a starshaped piece of bread and the red coloured bottle. She sat down on the sofa and thought of what happened the last day and about the wolve. He was beautifull also a little sary. She drunk the whole bottle and placed it back. And she took the second one. Strange drink it doesn do anything. But did it do nothing?? She took the paper and the pencil and wrote all words that came up in her. While she was doing that she got a warm feeling and her head was spinning. She threw the paper and the pencil on the ground and lay down on the sofa.................

Esther
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# Gesendet: 2 Dez 2005 12:55
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Ruslana wanted to open her eyes and take over controle but it didn't work. She had to dream the dream and the stuff worked on and on. She felt so much anger inside it started to cook. All her anger came out. Images flashed by and did go faster and faster than ............................... it was gone. Everything was quiet and green. She opened her eyes and if someone controled her hand picked up the pencil and paper. She wrote untill....

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