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D39
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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 15:22
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Esther
Sounds good! ;-)
Thanx ;)

Elliver
Haha sounds nice ;)
Thanx to u too ;)

D39
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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 18:41
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Elliver
BTW... what name did u think of for your story here?

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 18:45
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D39
BTW... what name did u think of for your story here?

There do you ask me something haha! To be honest: I have no idea yet... I thought something like "It's the fear", because that sentence will come back several times in the story... but I have to think about that ;)

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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 18:49
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Elliver
There do you ask me something haha!
Hmmmmmmmmmm... hahahahahaha :)))
To be honest: I have no idea yet... I thought something like "It's the fear", because that sentence will come back several times in the story... but I have to think about that ;)
Aha. Good idea... ''Peklon Nepmi'' ;))))))))))))))

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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 19:32
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D39
Aha. Good idea... ''Peklon Nepmi'' ;))))))))))))))

And......that means? ;-)

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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 19:34
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Elliver
And......that means? ;-)
Hahahahahaha... The title ;)

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 20:39
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D39
Hahahahahaha... The title ;)
okey hahaha sorry... ;-)

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# Gesendet: 14 Feb 2006 20:44
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Elliver
okey hahaha sorry... ;-)
No prob ;))))))))))) hehehehehehe :)

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 18:26
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I have a little update for my book:

My first chapter goes about the Fear himself. Upon a hill in a big forest stood a little tempel, it looked like a white cupola. Over the roof and against the walls grew plants and flowers, which were made from stone and were as white as snow. They looked so real that they seemed to be patrified. The roof was elegant and the six points of the roof were formed as a rose. It was the Lost Tempel of Mother Earth. That night something strange happened. In the Lost Tempel was an old hearth. On the right side of the hearth stood a statue of a woman: Mother Earth herself. The statue was beautiful and if it wasn't coloured white, you would think she was real. Suddenly it became very dark in the Tempel and the wood in the hearth began to burn.

Out of the ash, in the hearth of the Lost Tempel, rises a malicious skeleton. It was the body of the enemy of Mother Earth; The Fear. I reached untill here and I haven't been writing further, but I have desided that the statue of Mother Earth comes alive. She can't use her powers, but she can speak, only a little, because her lips are frozen because of the cold and besides she was very old (the statue).

Tell me what you think about this, the text above isn't the official text it's just a little summary, because the whole text untill now implies 24 pages...

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 20:01
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Elliver
Mmmmmmmmm... Good continuance... think it's good... so... go on. :)

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 20:09
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D39
Mmmmmmmmm... Good continuance... think it's good... so... go on. :)
Thank you! If something sounds strange, just say it ;)

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 20:13
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Elliver
Thank you! If something sounds strange, just say it ;)
Nope... I think nothing is strange... unless if in the text itself u wrote something like that. In this summary I see a very good development. ;)

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 20:59
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D39
Nope... I think nothing is strange... unless if in the text itself u wrote something like that. In this summary I see a very good development. ;)
Okey then it's all right :) but I'm unsure about the descriptions of things

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:05
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Elliver
Okey then it's all right :) but I'm unsure about the descriptions of things
If u need any help u can ask ;) BTW... did u wrote it on PC or on paper???

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:14
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D39
did u wrote it on PC or on paper???

On the PC... may I ask why? ;)

D39
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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:19
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Elliver
On the PC... may I ask why? ;)
Can u send me a copy??? PLS... I wanna see the story ;)

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:24
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D39
I'll try to :),, but there's a problem, I wrote it in Dutch and it'll be a lot of work to translate it into English or in another language..

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:25
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Elliver
I'll try to :),, but there's a problem, I wrote it in Dutch and it'll be a lot of work to translate it into English or in another language..
No prob. Send it as u have it. I'll see what I can do for that ;) OK?

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:31
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D39
No prob. Send it as u have it. I'll see what I can do for that ;) OK?
Allright :) but not now, I'm going to watch a movie! I'll try to send it to you tomorrow okey?

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:34
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Elliver
Allright :) but not now, I'm going to watch a movie! I'll try to send it to you tomorrow okey?
OK. I'll be waiting for it ;)
Enjoy the movie! :)

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:39
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D39
Enjoy the movie! :)
I'll try to, haha ;) thanks

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# Gesendet: 16 Feb 2006 21:43
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Elliver
I'll try to, haha ;) thanks
Ok. hehehehehe ;)))))))))))

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:21 - Edited by: Elliver
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I've made some scetches of scenes out of my story that I'd like to share,, I treat a bit with the darkness of the pictures because they were not so good to see after I scanned them. The first one is the Lost Tempel of Mother Earth from the outside...
[url=]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2710/blabla6qf.png[/url]


It stands on a hill in the forest, I call this woods the "Silence Woods" because it's very quiet there and almost no one comes to this tempel anymore since the people of Rea have build another one.... in the next drawing is the inside view of the Tempel.

[url=]http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/8950/blabla26hv.png[/url]

It has' a cupola roof. In the middle of the chamber stands an old hearth, wherefrom the ash fell out and now lays on the floor in front of it. The statue of Mother Earth is beside it and her feet dissapear in bushes of plants, which are also growing on the walls. On the other side of the hearth is a small staircase that is too low for us to climb on, but for who else is it ment? There are some torches hanging on the wall and on the ground lay a few roses.

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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:22
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hey the pictures won't appear?

Elliver
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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:26 - Edited by: Elliver
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oops...sorry.... :S this is a bit weird

D39
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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:32
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Elliver
Interesting pics. I could help u:



Elliver
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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:35
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D39
Thanks,, why won't they work if I do it :P

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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:37
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Elliver
Thanks,, why won't they work if I do it :P
Hehehehehe. DM ;)
Dunno why... I must have magic powers ;))))))) :PPP

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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:40
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D39
Hehehehehe. DM ;)
Dunno why... I must have magic powers ;))))))) :PPP


Hahaha yeahh..right :P

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# Gesendet: 17 Feb 2006 22:46
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Elliver
Hahaha yeahh..right :
Your story might have had an effect on me ;))))))))

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